History: The Prophet Translation, Dubious Places

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Please add new lines to the ''top'' of the table. The format of Location is <Chapter>:<Sentence> ||__Date__|__Location__|__Text__|__Comment__|__Suggestion__|__Corrected__ 06 May 2006|1:1|__...ke'a cerni pe'a ke'a mo'u le pare senanca...__|What stops the morning from getting tangled with the ending of the 12 years?|Add a ku'o to end the relative clause| 06 May 2006|1:1|__...bevri ko'a...__|variable referanced before assignment (ko'a with no attaching goi)|Should be vo'a to point at denpa x1| 18 Jan 2006|1:1|__...le tcadu me'e la .orfaliz. __|These are two separate, unconnected terms. Also, la .orfaliz. cu tcadu .i zo .orfaliz. cu cmene | {le tcadu po'u la .orfaliz.} or {le tcadu pe me'e zo .orfaliz.}| 18 Jan 2006|1:2|__...ko'a cpare le cmana ze'o le tcadu bitmu lo ka galtu__|"...he climbed the hill without the city walls"%%%1. 'Hill' is {cmama'a} (jbovlaste). %%%2. Is {loka galtu} really required for "climbing" in this context?| ko'a mo'i ga'u cpare le cmama'a ze'o le tcadu bitmu| 18 Jan 2006|1:1|__...denpa le sexruti bloti le tcadu me'e la .orfaliz. le pu'u bevri ko'a le daplu pe le ko'a vejbena kei__|{le pu'u bevri ko'a...} fits x4 of {denpa}, 'activity interrupted by waiting', so it means "waited, while not <something> carrying him to the island of his birth". In fact, this phrase must correspond to the ship, not waiting. |It's better to attach this restriction to {le bloti} with {poi}, but it disrupts the original structure of the sentence.| 18 Jan 2006|1:1|__...pu denpa le sexruti bloti le tcadu...__|1.{le tcadu} fits x3 of {denpa}, 'state of waiting', so it means "waited being a town".|use BAI modal.| ||

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