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Re: Fractal Lojban Sentences

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I humbly suggest removing the {tu'a}. Before {lo nu} it's an odd construction that doesn't seem to be reflected in your translation.

Also, I think you need a {cu} before the bebna; otherwise the {si'o}-abstraction becomes a seltau.

mu'o mi'e komfo,amonan